This story has a serious twist!
I enjoyed reading it to see if she would find true love like in the original story. Obviously she was very happy alone in the end. I got to see her anger in the end of the story, maybe you can add some descriptive words before the end to show how angry she was at her mother and how all of that was building up inside her. something to give more explanation why she decides to kill her, maybe some dialogue between the two.
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