Response to Joshoa

This is deep!
It is very interesting. I like your choice of words to describe how you feel, it gives a sense of reality. What I got from it is that the character in your story has a struggle with the loss of his mother. He is trying to cope with that by doing some activities to make him feel like he's living; like running. I was not able to match it with any fairy tale. I know the title says cinda-reila. What is reila really looking for? what is she/he missing? What is her/his real struggle? I suggest you add something that helps her/him fill part of the void left by the loss of the mother, or give examples of her relationships with others to show how this tragedy at an early age affected her.